Outsider Poetry, web comics, zombie movie reviews, artwork, and commentary on politics, fantasy football, and modern culture by Outsider poet Thomas L. Vaultonburg.
Sunday, September 13, 2009
ZOMBIE LOGIC COMICS INTRODUCES DEMOTED #1 BY ANDREW DAVIS
Andrew Davis allowed us to use the first episode of his webcomic, Demoted. He is a great illustrator and now has his own website SpaghettiPlates
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Brilliance.
ReplyDeleteOMG! the inspirational posters - haha!
ReplyDeleteNo Fair! You actually took the time to draw yours! Good shit, man.
ReplyDeleteAnd a lot of time at that. In fact, way more than it should have taken. I'm off my game.
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks, y'all.
I believe what you posted was very reasonable. However, consider this, suppose you added a little content?
ReplyDeleteI am not suggesting your information is not solid.
, however suppose you added something that grabbed people's attention? I mean "ZOMBIE LOGIC COMICS INTRODUCES DEMOTED #1 BY ANDREW DAVIS" is kinda vanilla. You might peek at Yahoo's front
page and see how they create post titles to grab viewers to open the links.
You might add a related video or a picture
or two to grab people interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it might bring your website a little livelier.
Look into my blog post - household cleaning supplies organizer
I agree. One should never write a title including the words "Andrew Davis." I'm going to change the title to... aww, hell with it, I haven't eaten breakfast yet.
ReplyDelete